Just finished the last part of chapter four. I then combined all three into one. I'm not sure about releasing chapers in parts. I may go back to putting the out in one go... It's quite nice to feel you're making progress though... Chaper four was a tricky one since I really wanted a sense of time passing, but needed a few vigniettes to give it pace. Hope it worked.
Red Spring at #68 for 'hotness' which is nice...